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i´ll try to come faster with the pages from now  . page 2 of my comic, i personally like it much better than page 1. notice that it is also smaller (page 1 will be shrinked then)also, for the dialogues, i took from  the idea of making them translucent... they look much neater than the plain white globe. anyway, you think i should ask Kay if she doesn´t mind?  hope you like it, i am already working on page 3. the story is still happy, but i must warn you that it becomes much darker and more violent in the next ones  and i still have to write a journal about some interesting facts about it, so if you´ll follow the story, you shouldbetter read it. i´ll see if i can write it tomorrow... and, PS: last day of winter... i´ll miss it -.- PS2: (AND PLEASE, PLEASE, FEEL FREE TO POINT ANY ENGLISH MISPELLING, SO I CAN FIX IT) ------------------------------------------------------------------------- je je, para el comic hago la excepción y pongo la descripción en ingles primero, así los demás tienen el link más a mano  intentaré avanzar más rá  ido con las otras páginas, de hecho ya estoy trabajando en la 3 . noten que ésta es menor (en tamaño) que la primera (a la q más tarde achicaré un poco), y en lo personal, me gusta mucho más. en cuanto a los diálogos, confieso que le copié a ésto de hacer los globos de texto translúcidos... creo que se ven mucho mejor que un blanco plano. espero q a Kay no le molste... creen q debería preguntarle? espero que les guste . ya estoy con la página 3. la historia, recién comenzada es todavía feliz, pero debo advertirles que se pone mucho más oscura y violenta en las próximas páginas de paso, aún tengo q escribir un journal con algunos datos importantes acerca de comic, si vas a seguirlo, creo q sería mejor q lo leas. a ver si mañana puedo escribirlo! y, PD: adios invierno -.- lo voy a extrañar! |
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Woww~~ This is really impressive! : DDD I love the birds~~ And gawd.. I'm amazed at the amount of care and detail you put into each panel, like each one is a picture by itself.. And still have the motivation to do more, faster. xDD I need some of your drive, woman!
You may have been influenced, but Kay doesn't own translucent speech balloons.. ^^ I see them a lot.
The English looks great~~ : DD Nice grammar. I did notice a couple of very minor things, though.. :3 These might look a bit better~
Balloon 1: Is everything there okay? ...
Balloon 4: What cute puppies! ...
Balloon 5: ... how healthy they look, especially the one to the right. ...
Balloon 6: ... I think I should do the same!
Again, really small things. xD I make typos like that all the time... Rawr~~! Great work~~ : DD
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